Sun rouses me, calls me to the window
where she stains low-hanging clouds like tea
steeping in boiled water.
I feel fat with love today
after waking from a uncanny dream
where streets lined with radiator brush trees
led me, Panglossian to have been seduced on a Friday,
to you.
While sun leaps softly out of the tree tops
and plays an angelic note or two, and seagull wings
beat the grey tapestry to rid it of dust,
I wear him
like a cashmere scarf that I have to wash by hand
to keep it lint free.
When I start feeling a little full of myself,
I remind myself that I must POP!
Swelling like a warm loaf, this day
is already an eager jumble of hand and tongue
salving him, the subject,
the depicted object in the mind of an artist.
But it won’t do, I cannot
contain his boundaries, we are not
one, and I
cannot lay him down.
oh your imagery is superb Conny.
love this “where she stains low-hanging clouds like tea
steeping in boiled water.
I feel fat with love today’
AND
“I cannot lie him down. ”
ππ
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Thank you, Cindy!
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Feels wrong to hang on one line of a poem this wonderful all the way through, but “Panglossian to be seduced on a Friday” is something only you could come up with! π
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Thank you π Apparently, in local fisherfolk lore it’s bad luck to start a new relationship or get married on a Friday. Actually, it’s bad luck to do pretty much anything on a Friday!
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Wonderful: something I didnβt know before! π
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I have lots of these. Like leaving sand on the top step of the stairs after you’ve had a domestic! I’m trying to work them into poems if they fit.
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I like the warmth of the words you’ve woven. They’re so tastefully done.
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Thanks so much!
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It was my pleasure.
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Gorgeous and original phrases, Conny! Bravo to you! I hope you don’t mind; I mentioned your blog on my post a few days ago. π
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Oh thank you Michele π That so nice of you! I’ll catch up with my weekly digests over the weekend. I look forward to reading your posts!
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You are welcome, Conny. Was/is my honor to highlight your blog. Enjoy your weekend. π
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You too, Michele. Have a great weekend!
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Such interesting and immersive prose.
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What gorgeous opening lines! I so love the stark imagery and the way the sun plays down through this piece. π
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Thanks Layla! That’s a nice comment!
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Love this poem Conny! Love the way you build it up and end it!
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Thank you Dominic! I appreciate that, because I used to just launch into poems, and then sometimes they felt uncompleted. I’m really trying to get this sense of opening, building to a peak or two, and slowing down and closing. If that makes sense π It’s mostly in the rhythm.
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Hmmm. Love the sound and flow here. My pleasure Conny!
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